How It Works: Chapter 3 - Birds of a FeatherChapter 3: Birds of a Feather It was late afternoon as the Super Speedy Cider Squeezy rolled to a stop outside the small cafe. Flim collapsed on the couch affixed to the back of the machine, "You go on ahead brother," he said waving a hoof towards Flam. "I'll stay out here and," he paused for a moment thinking of an excuse, "Guard the cider." Flam grumbled as he walked away from his brother and into the small business, "Probably for the best. He'll just mess it up again," he muttered. Flam had been on edge since leaving, or rather being chased, out of Ponyville earlier that day, and for the time being it was Flim who would be acting
Everything's good, but you might want to try making the magical glow around Trixie's unicorn horn just a little darker.
Nice job on this piece =3
Trixie looks like she's having fun, Mischievous old mare XD